Top poster is the best. Nice technique and especially the line of people.
The transparent bars, at this point, don't share the same formal language as the rest. Keep, but needs some further attention.
Copy needs more hierarchical emphasis. It is getting a little lost (size contrast etc).
The brown canvas area at the top is a focus point for no apparent reason. It's not the material, but rather, the shape is awkward and how it intersects with the hand.
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Top poster is the best. Nice technique and especially the line of people.
The transparent bars, at this point, don't share the same formal language as the rest. Keep, but needs some further attention.
Copy needs more hierarchical emphasis. It is getting a little lost (size contrast etc).
The brown canvas area at the top is a focus point for no apparent reason. It's not the material, but rather, the shape is awkward and how it intersects with the hand.
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